Great looking map and eager to play this. There is still a mixture of English/Dutch names for the island territories (Kingdom of... , Sultanate of...).

Names of continents in Dutch can be more coherent.
in a geographical direction from the middle:
- Noordwesten
- Zuidwesten
- Midden ...

I will need a sitter from Thursday March 6st 5PM EST, until Friday March 21th 5PM EST. I have 2 active games, one deadlocked trench game and a tournament.

If you can do this for me, please pm me for additional details/instructions. Thanks!

Update: found someone now.

Legend now says:
monarchs attack pope
monarches attacked by social classes

More readible would be:
monarchs attack pope
social classes attack monarches

1 of those continents to give the +50.
So it is not one time +50 per whole game but one time per turn. Then I misread your legend.

Looking at your army numbers it seems to be working for the large map at least. And changes satisfactory.

I dont understand.

Army numbers look good. Checking ...

Looking at your army numbers it seems to be working for the large map at least. And changes satisfactory. Attacking the budget panel from Display, Sponsors, Stands and Floodlights is not really needed, I am curious about your motivation for this from the soccer point of view.

The +50 for holding ...

My comment on graphics is that the stronghold doesn't need the two inner circles behind the stronghold title. Also, the wall with the three entrances could use some shadows.

ABout the water texture: lakes are already in line with other textures. Seas, mountains and forests could be less pixelated ...

For now I have given all feedback that comes to mind. If you are looking for army numbers to check if it fits on the map: http://www.conquerclub.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=649&t=151232.

About the difficulty of the victory condition, it might help to mention the army number of starting neutrals. Remember that this is the large map, also a small map is needed where army numbers still fit.

Here is an idea to make use of space. Excuse me for the blunt editing.

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Shareholders have a more prominent position now. When army numbers are placed, the gameflow will also be more intuitive with a lot of starting neutrals. Making gameplay recognizable from other CC maps might help (no ideas now).

What is a lineup bonus mentioned in training? Training could be a ...

With two guns there would be 10 starting positions...

edit: dolomite already suggested this

Territories (4) Number of Defending Territories (4) Number of Attacking Territories (7) Number of Neighbours (5)

sannerman...the bonus calculator we use shows the above for a bonus of 4.
personally i think i think you'd need at least 4 to help keep the region.
Okay it will work. By the way it ...

So 0,5k budget are starting positions?

No. Starting points are the 8 Shareholders.

Now I get the loop: Shareholders -> Coach -> Bench -> Field
Coach -> Referee/Tactics/Training
Shareholders -> Budget -> different aquisitions/Shareholders

Ordering this loop on the map might help for ...

Well thought out. But as said before, simplicity is key.

So 0,5k budget are starting positions? Players in the field do not have to be starting positions as they can be attacked by the bench. Baseball map is similar.

How do you abtain a bench player? Attacking from the 0,5k budget would be logical ...

Great looking map as always.

The bonusses take some effort to identify. Maybe the swans could be ordered in the same composition as the map? This might concentrate them on the bottom right corner. Bonus of 4 for Melville could be 3, as there are 3 boundaries.

loenatiek and sannemanrobinson are totally in

That will be the Samarium River map from the ideas drafts forum.

It looks really nice but also raises many questions:
Are monsters the same as creatures?
Can creatures assault rooms as well?
There is no +3 standard bonus at the start of the game?
Is dungeon a certain room?
Room 3 should also connect to 13?

I like the conquerors more than the creatures. They are ...

Will there be a flush button as well?

Is there a life after CC? Or a big black hole?

THe one way assault from Tian Shui is less visible now, maybe adding a remark in the legend would be helpful for people who first see this map.

Between Han Zhong and Jet Ling the border would be more clear if there would be less mountains between those regions.

Overall I like the sharp and ...

Could you adjust the number of cannon balls next to the cannon according to the number of targets? So Davis would have 2 cannon balls because it has two targets. This would avoid missing any targets or having colour problem issues.

Anacostia to Southwest would have my preference to avoid too much dominance of Bolling. Someone else might have a different opinion though.

7. I'm sorry, but those mountains do not go with the rest of the map. They stick out like a sore thumb, so they need to be changed. RjBeals did a quick tutorial on hand drawn mountains , take a look at it and see what you can do.
Ouch, this one does sting a bit. Of course Rj makes it look ...

The background is a great idea. Instead a different background in every zone I would compose one background that blends into each other.

The castle can use some cleaning. I presume you filtered it with detect edges but the buildings have some strange double lines.

The 4 zones are not really ...

Okay thanks for showing them. THe public transport lines are not so prominent anymore. I wonder what other people have to say about it.

The 888's are mostly to show if there is enough distance between army circles. Especially on the small map at Perque and Piceas it could become too crowded. If you ...