1. THE ALLIED should be THE ALLIES
2. Same applies in lines 4 and 5 under that heading.
3. No man's land etc. etc should probably read...
"No man's land: all troops (N1 to N18) reset to 1 neutral at start of next turn." - no need to capitalise "All" or pluralise "starts"
4. Shell Holes (S1, S3, S4, S6) Can Bombard Nearest Fox Hole -> = One way bombard...
You got capitals for everything in that and as such it is inconsistent with the line above...the only capital needed is for "Shell" as in
"Shell holes (S1, S3, S4, S6) can bombard nearest fox hole (no punkt required) -> = one-way bombard"
...one-way is hyphenated according to the Oxford Dictionary.
5. From Dictionary.com
foxĀ·hole
noun
a small pit, usually for one or two soldiers, dug as a shelter in a battle area.
...although the Oxford Dictionary shows it as being one word...all i am saying is that you need to have consistency in how it is shown, and at present you have two versions ->Fox Hole. and Foxhole
6. There appears to be some inconsistency in the arrows used for indicators under the Bombardments sections...some are short and some are long
7. you could probably change the BY in the map and xml references to small "by"
Just some suggestions, sorry so picky...but you are looking for stamp?
I see there is a 888s map on page 6, but has anyone done anything towards the Colour Blind test.
Apart from that, great map and great artwork.
