Also, can you move over these names to center them in the territory more? Gloucs., Essex, Oxon, Lincolnshire, West Midlands.
Your name/number locations for Strathclyde are different on the small and large maps. Use what you did for the small for both - it looks better.
There's water texture? Where?

I know it's called Lothian & Borders.... but you're telling me if I told an Englishman Lothian, he wouldn't know where I was talking about? Come on now. There's already a Borders in Ireland... switch L&B to just Lothian.
And it's never too late for comments. This map isn't done yet.