"The Beautiful Game"

by **darkangelsguy205** on Mon Apr 20, 2009 3:25 pm

in this form we will talk all about soccer stragys teams and favorit teams.

all we will do is talk about soocer(football).

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1.darkangelsguy205
2.Wolffystyle
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by **Wolffystyle** on Mon Apr 20, 2009 3:47 pm

The first commentary that I will leave for you is to change the name to:

Soccer Players and Fans

or

Soccer Players

Your list of nouns is repetitive. All Soccer Goalies are, in fact, Soccer Players. All Soccer Defenders are, in fact, Soccer Players.

Maybe you want to include players who speak other languages, call it: "The Beautiful Game".

Good luck

Wolffy~ :-$

by **Wolffystyle** on Mon Apr 20, 2009 3:52 pm

You spelled it incorrectly:

Just copy and paste below:

"The Beautiful Game"

Be sure to try to use a spell-checker when you type up anything official.

Hope this helps.

Wolffy~ :-$